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Captivating

posted by saltybug.com 18/03/2015 6 Comments
Thankyou to Shelly’s Cabaret for letting me take part.
Captivating

 

Captivating 
 
I don’t know how I got here, standing, staring. I think I looked up.
It speaks to me of possibility. Dare to dream.
Where do I want to go today, who do I want to be?
Like the old wardrobe, do I reach out to feel the cool metal of that old latch on my fingertips. I do.
I feel the tension between the lock and its keeper. Nestled like entwined fingers.
As I give a gentle push, I feel a brush of cool air kiss my cheeks, I feel that warm bright light run her fingers down my face. I instinctively lean towards this gesture, seeking, craving that tender touch again.
I close my eyes and feel this moment.
This moment of openness, where anything is possible.
Carefully I raise my knee to the ledge and climb up. I feel the grain of the window sill on my skin and admire its strength.
Sitting in this window I notice my size, it is a tight fit yet one that feels comfortable.
I look out.
I feel it pull. I feel desire to be out there.
Leaning forward slightly I raise my arms out like the wings of a bird and I just believe.
I am not afraid because I know I can.
With that faith I depart, and that gentle breeze carries me away.
I have not gone forever.
I will always come home.
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6 Comments

Anonymous 18/03/2015 at 9:50 pm

Would you stop bloody showing off with your amazing writing!! You are inspiring me to start my book ive been threatening to write for years! Love this!! Just love it. T xxx

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SaltyBug 18/03/2015 at 9:58 pm

If you recall I did offer to ghost write it for you….hmmm??? The offer is still there but you'd have to come live with us for a while. Your story is a best seller T. It really is. xxx Thank you for your praise and support, my ego is suitably stroked. 8)

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mackenzieglanville 19/03/2015 at 7:37 am

I love this prompt, everyone is writing such amazing work and I love yours. It is a different side to you and I'm loving it. You should write a book! Awesome, loved it!

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Mia @ The Chronicles of Chaos 19/03/2015 at 9:45 am

I love this! My favorite line is: "I am not afraid because I know I can." Beautiful. Thanks so much for linking up with Shelly & me. Hope you join us again! 🙂

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V. Nino 19/03/2015 at 2:03 pm

This is so beautifully written! It makes me want to open a window and just experience the senses you mentioned, like the cool air kissing my cheeks :).

I walk away from this poem feeling peaceful and brave!

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SaltyBug 19/03/2015 at 3:41 pm

Thank you! Such kind comments. I am thrilled to finally be brave enough to publish my writing, and to have such lovely feedback is just an added bonus.

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